Oooooooh child things are gonna get easier.
Oooooooh child things are gonna get easier.
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None needed it was gay and weak on my part l.e won regardlessOriginally Posted by Lenox
Lol way to lighten things up in this bitch
Oooooooh child things are gonna get brighter.
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Lol sup stranger
Not much. Pissed that my coffee machine broke. Hungry but my roommates took the car to work. The struggle is real.
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Who are u on rr?
Quickly losing the meaning of hope and the feelings I've wrote,
Pieces of me have broke, should I just put the guillotine to my throat?
Floating down the sea of hope but in my dreams demons have awoke,
Death awaits at heavens gates, I'm in devils grace,
Not getting accepted just from expressions on my face, This is the ending days,
Remembering my best friends, my memory is a precious place,
Gotta take control of my life but touching souls is like a roll of the dice,
Over throwing my goals in an on going price, am I the only one who knows I'm nice?
Cause I get depressed after a tragedy like a soldiers wife,
In life you take a right but i might take a left,
Suicidal so I keep the gun under my bed put it right to my head and ignite the lead,
I used to fight but I'd rather take my life instead
This isn't open mic. What's wrong with you? This isn't a hypothetical question either, it's one that immediately demands an answer.
Cool.
No, you prostitot. That is not how it works. When a Detective asks you a question you answer.
And now I know your problem- you can not comprehend the English Language.
I don't like that you only rhymed three lines in the beginning and then changed your rhyme scheme. Finish the bar before you switch it up or it throws it off. Wording needs a little polishing and you need to actually flow through a storyline. It's almost like you write summaries instead of actually storytelling. It's weird and has no depth. You'll get it though.
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You are my only negative feedbacker, congrats. Lol nah ya I'm scratching the collab with Nicasso I don't like the topic
And btw you're exactly right about the summary part.. I do summaries unless I'm doing stories or plots @Stranger
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