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Last edited by Chrit.; April 4th, 2009 at 12:36 AM
AI
Yeah
*Insert Sig Here*
What ur reppin is wack, I cant help how Im bestin this fag
who's harshest material was a fuckin section in mags
This kid aint fresh with whips, his whole damn swag is a trite lie
cause coop deville'n and drives around like a white guy
You're a compulsive hater dude, n thats why this fool'll get fucked
since you cant stomach meters, Ill just give u a foot to the gut
It's all ur fault guy, Im forced into dropping my verses on time
cause you cant ever give an extension while ur girl is on mine
me n her are tight punk, she's been takin it from behind bruh
So while ur writing, Ill finger the cunt before even seeing a line up
Now ur tryin to flex right? but you aint never been givin the best ride
Cause I seen ur xterra... hole in ur pride with talk of ur sex life
The games are done, this crossdressing fool's a flaming bum
cause duke's a hazzard... and has a closet full of daisy ones
Ur a text geek, while my lines are always getting the best feed
To the point Punch'll reword it, and end up beating you next week
16
Last edited by Chrit.; April 3rd, 2009 at 10:56 PM
AI
DAMN you’re a bitch, a waste of time, a faggot and a fake combinedOriginally Posted by Spit
And you’d be a shitty Bartender, cuz you’re only good at making whine
Plus you don’t take your time writing, it’s why you’ll never finish ahead
You only write last minute cuz you usually only last minutes in bed
I don’t wanna diminish ya cred, but you deserved your spot in my mag ya clown
Cuz I nailed Chrit to the wall, and the whole fucking thing came crashing down
Don’t get bashful now, you’re overrated. Ho you’re a bust, in fact:
The only W you deserve, is that nigga’s spot in the Rusty match
Fuck, you’re wack. You think you’re advancing? You must be fuckin ‘round
He only wants Token, to use it for the subway and be considered ‘underground’
Another sound from you and I’ll smack you again, you know what C bout
Bar hasn’t bitten in 2 years, cuz 2 years ago I knocked his fuckin teeth out!
He shouts about beating people up. Please, you’re more like a featherweight
Last time he took somebody out, he couldn’t get her to agree on a second date
You’re second-rate. And I hate extensions, I shouldn’t have to say it though
But you posted your verse late dumbass, April fool’s day was two days ago
Killed you in the mag. Killed you here.
*Insert Sig Here*
What ur reppin is wack, I cant help how Im bestin this fag
who's harshest material was a fuckin section in mags
good
This kid aint fresh with whips, his whole damn swag is a trite lie
cause coop deville'n and drives around like a white guy
nice
You're a compulsive hater dude, n thats why this fool'll get fucked
since you cant stomach meters, Ill just give u a foot to the gut
meh, played kinda
It's all ur fault guy, Im forced into dropping my verses on time
cause you cant ever give an extension while ur girl is on mine
good
me n her are tight punk, she's been takin it from behind bruh
So while ur writing, Ill finger the cunt before even seeing a line up
good
Now ur tryin to flex right? but you aint never been givin the best ride
Cause I seen ur xterra... hole in ur pride with talk of ur sex life
nice
The games are done, this crossdressing fool's a flaming bum
cause duke's a hazzard... and has a closet full of daisy ones
fresh
Ur a text geek, while my lines are always getting the best feed
To the point Punch'll reword it, and end up beating you next week
lol nice
vs.
DAMN you’re a bitch, a waste of time, a faggot and a fake combined
And you’d be a shitty Bartender, cuz you’re only good at making whine
decent
Plus you don’t take your time writing, it’s why you’ll never finish ahead
You only write last minute cuz you usually only last minutes in bed
meh
I don’t wanna diminish ya cred, but you deserved your spot in my mag ya clown
Cuz I nailed Chrit to the wall, and the whole fucking thing came crashing down
good
Don’t get bashful now, you’re overrated. Ho you’re a bust, in fact:
The only W you deserve, is that nigga’s spot in the Rusty match
nice
Fuck, you’re wack. You think you’re advancing? You must be fuckin ‘round
He only wants Token, to use it for the subway and be considered ‘underground’
mad playedAnother sound from you and I’ll smack you again, you know what C bout
Bar hasn’t bitten in 2 years, cuz 2 years ago I knocked his fuckin teeth out!
even more played. bite/teeth out? C'mon..
He shouts about beating people up. Please, you’re more like a featherweight
Last time he took somebody out, he couldn’t get her to agree on a second date
good
You’re second-rate. And I hate extensions, I shouldn’t have to say it though
But you posted your verse late dumbass, April fool’s day was two days ago
good but seen a couple of these this week.
this was a decent battle, I expected it to be better though. Chrit had one line I felt was played while coop had a few. Bar also had more lines that I considered "nice". You both had a lot of good hits but I have chrit winning for being more consistent.
vote:chrit
Vs.
chrit: consistent verse. Some good wordplay. a few of your bars were under developed.. coulda used more time on them..
fav:
Ur a text geek, while my lines are always getting the best feed
To the point Punch'll reword it, and end up beating you next weekThis kid aint fresh with whips, his whole damn swag is a trite lie
cause coop deville'n and drives around like a white guy
Coop: you started off ok. Some nice punches mixed in. But at least 3 of your bars were really old concepts. even with the personals added into it..
fav:
You’re second-rate. And I hate extensions, I shouldn’t have to say it though
But you posted your verse late dumbass, April fool’s day was two days ago
over all// good match i think. couple gems a piece
v/ chrit
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$9.99 for an unbiased vote
$14.99 full breakdown vote
What ur reppin is wack, I cant help how Im bestin this fag
who's harshest material was a fuckin section in mags
O.K MADE ME CHUCKLE
This kid aint fresh with whips, his whole damn swag is a trite lie
cause coop deville'n and drives around like a white guy
O.K
You're a compulsive hater dude, n thats why this fool'll get fucked
since you cant stomach meters, Ill just give u a foot to the gut
NICE
It's all ur fault guy, Im forced into dropping my verses on time
cause you cant ever give an extension while ur girl is on mine
IGHT
me n her are tight punk, she's been takin it from behind bruh
So while ur writing, Ill finger the cunt before even seeing a line up
EHHH
Now ur tryin to flex right? but you aint never been givin the best ride
Cause I seen ur xterra... hole in ur pride with talk of ur sex life
NAHHH
The games are done, this crossdressing fool's a flaming bum
cause duke's a hazzard... and has a closet full of daisy ones
LOL
Ur a text geek, while my lines are always getting the best feed
To the point Punch'll reword it, and end up beating you next week
LOL IGHT
Overall enjoyable verse to read.
vs.
DAMN you’re a bitch, a waste of time, a faggot and a fake combined
And you’d be a shitty Bartender, cuz you’re only good at making whine
EHH O.K
Plus you don’t take your time writing, it’s why you’ll never finish ahead
You only write last minute cuz you usually only last minutes in bed
LIKE THIS BAR IF YOUR SET UP WAS MORE RELATING TO YOUR PUNCH IT WOULD OF BEEN EASIER UNDERSTOOD.
I don’t wanna diminish ya cred, but you deserved your spot in my mag ya clown
Cuz I nailed Chrit to the wall, and the whole fucking thing came crashing down
SEE AGAIN IF YOUR SET UP RELATED MORE ABOUT HIS WEIGHT THIS WOULD OF BEEN A SOLID BAR BUT IT JUST COMES OF AS A LITTLE LESS THAN DECENT.
Don’t get bashful now, you’re overrated. Ho you’re a bust, in fact:
The only W you deserve, is that nigga’s spot in the Rusty match
LOL
Fuck, you’re wack. You think you’re advancing? You must be fuckin ‘round
He only wants Token, to use it for the subway and be considered ‘underground’
NAHH
Another sound from you and I’ll smack you again, you know what C bout
Bar hasn’t bitten in 2 years, cuz 2 years ago I knocked his fuckin teeth out!
KINDA OF FORCED ITS O.K
He shouts about beating people up. Please, you’re more like a featherweight
Last time he took somebody out, he couldn’t get her to agree on a second date
LOL
You’re second-rate. And I hate extensions, I shouldn’t have to say it though
But you posted your verse late dumbass, April fool’s day was two days ago
NAHH
Coop i felt like your setups brougth you down cuz if you related your set more to your punch your punches would of been more effective still an alright verse.
V//BARTENDER
What ur reppin is wack, I cant help how Im bestin this fag
who's harshest material was a fuckin section in mags
lol, pretty cool, a bit simple
This kid aint fresh with whips, his whole damn swag is a trite lie
cause coop deville'n and drives around like a white guy
nah
You're a compulsive hater dude, n thats why this fool'll get fucked
since you cant stomach meters, Ill just give u a foot to the gut
blah
It's all ur fault guy, Im forced into dropping my verses on time
cause you cant ever give an extension while ur girl is on mine
played concept, but personal saved it a bit. decent
me n her are tight punk, she's been takin it from behind bruh
So while ur writing, Ill finger the cunt before even seeing a line up
nah
Now ur tryin to flex right? but you aint never been givin the best ride
Cause I seen ur xterra... hole in ur pride with talk of ur sex life
seen too my x..so and so lines lately, but this was aight
The games are done, this crossdressing fool's a flaming bum
cause duke's a hazzard... and has a closet full of daisy ones
alright
Ur a text geek, while my lines are always getting the best feed
To the point Punch'll reword it, and end up beating you next week
rofl
vs.
DAMN you’re a bitch, a waste of time, a faggot and a fake combined
And you’d be a shitty Bartender, cuz you’re only good at making whine
weak
Plus you don’t take your time writing, it’s why you’ll never finish ahead
You only write last minute cuz you usually only last minutes in bed
nah
I don’t wanna diminish ya cred, but you deserved your spot in my mag ya clown
Cuz I nailed Chrit to the wall, and the whole fucking thing came crashing down
ehhh ok
Don’t get bashful now, you’re overrated. Ho you’re a bust, in fact:
The only W you deserve, is that nigga’s spot in the Rusty match
lol, cool
Fuck, you’re wack. You think you’re advancing? You must be fuckin ‘round
He only wants Token, to use it for the subway and be considered ‘underground’
nah
Another sound from you and I’ll smack you again, you know what C bout
Bar hasn’t bitten in 2 years, cuz 2 years ago I knocked his fuckin teeth out!
eh
He shouts about beating people up. Please, you’re more like a featherweight
Last time he took somebody out, he couldn’t get her to agree on a second date
played
You’re second-rate. And I hate extensions, I shouldn’t have to say it though
But you posted your verse late dumbass, April fool’s day was two days ago
rofl, dope
Overall: Pretty weak battle, Chrit had 1 nice bar, and a couple decent. Coop didn't have much of anything I liked except his closer was pretty dope.
Vote: Chrit
What ur reppin is wack, I cant help how Im bestin this fag
who's harshest material was a fuckin section in mags
ha, ok.
This kid aint fresh with whips, his whole damn swag is a trite lie
cause coop deville'n and drives around like a white guy
don't like.
You're a compulsive hater dude, n thats why this fool'll get fucked
since you cant stomach meters, Ill just give u a foot to the gut
old concept.
It's all ur fault guy, Im forced into dropping my verses on time
cause you cant ever give an extension while ur girl is on mine
decent flip cause of the personal.
me n her are tight punk, she's been takin it from behind bruh
So while ur writing, Ill finger the cunt before even seeing a line up
not feeling.
Now ur tryin to flex right? but you aint never been givin the best ride
Cause I seen ur xterra... hole in ur pride with talk of ur sex life
pretty good.
The games are done, this crossdressing fool's a flaming bum
cause duke's a hazzard... and has a closet full of daisy ones
ha, not great, but ok.
Ur a text geek, while my lines are always getting the best feed
To the point Punch'll reword it, and end up beating you next week
LMAO. I read about that.
vs.
DAMN you’re a bitch, a waste of time, a faggot and a fake combined
And you’d be a shitty Bartender, cuz you’re only good at making whine
you don't make wine as a Bartender, forced.
Plus you don’t take your time writing, it’s why you’ll never finish ahead
You only write last minute cuz you usually only last minutes in bed
nope, wtf at that?
I don’t wanna diminish ya cred, but you deserved your spot in my mag ya clown
Cuz I nailed Chrit to the wall, and the whole fucking thing came crashing down
eh, decent.
Don’t get bashful now, you’re overrated. Ho you’re a bust, in fact:
The only W you deserve, is that nigga’s spot in the Rusty match
hah, ok.
Fuck, you’re wack. You think you’re advancing? You must be fuckin ‘round
He only wants Token, to use it for the subway and be considered ‘underground’
nope.
Another sound from you and I’ll smack you again, you know what C bout
Bar hasn’t bitten in 2 years, cuz 2 years ago I knocked his fuckin teeth out!
not feeling the self glory.
He shouts about beating people up. Please, you’re more like a featherweight
Last time he took somebody out, he couldn’t get her to agree on a second date
old concept here.
You’re second-rate. And I hate extensions, I shouldn’t have to say it though
But you posted your verse late dumbass, April fool’s day was two days ago
ahahaha, nice.
I really thought Bartender would have more quotables, but his verse was still pretty solid and consistent, so it wasn't too rough. I think the wording on a few lines was off and that's why they felt a little off to me. Coop, not bad bro, most of your lines are weirdly worded and that opener was forced too. Overall, you had a few good hits, but it just didn't seem to me that it was enough to edge over Bartender in this match man, sorry.
v/Bartender, more consistent.
What ur reppin is wack, I cant help how Im bestin this fag
who's harshest material was a fuckin section in mags
It's all ur fault guy, Im forced into dropping my verses on time
cause you cant ever give an extension while ur girl is on mine
me n her are tight punk, she's been takin it from behind bruh
So while ur writing, Ill finger the cunt before even seeing a line up
Now ur tryin to flex right? but you aint never been givin the best ride
Cause I seen ur xterra... hole in ur pride with talk of ur sex life
Ur a text geek, while my lines are always getting the best feed
To the point Punch'll reword it, and end up beating you next week
vs.
I don’t wanna diminish ya cred, but you deserved your spot in my mag ya clown
Cuz I nailed Chrit to the wall, and the whole fucking thing came crashing down
Don’t get bashful now, you’re overrated. Ho you’re a bust, in fact:
The only W you deserve, is that nigga’s spot in the Rusty match
Another sound from you and I’ll smack you again, you know what C bout
Bar hasn’t bitten in 2 years, cuz 2 years ago I knocked his fuckin teeth out!
He shouts about beating people up. Please, you’re more like a featherweight
Last time he took somebody out, he couldn’t get her to agree on a second date
I got Chrit just a bit ahead of Coop...
Solid showing by both, but Chrit was a hair wittier...and he had the punch of the battle...that shit in bold had me going "woah"!
Nice read.
Peace
You're a compulsive hater dude, n thats why this fool'll get fucked
since you cant stomach meters, Ill just give u a foot to the gut
It's all ur fault guy, Im forced into dropping my verses on time
cause you cant ever give an extension while ur girl is on mine
me n her are tight punk, she's been takin it from behind bruh
So while ur writing, Ill finger the cunt before even seeing a line up
The games are done, this crossdressing fool's a flaming bum
cause duke's a hazzard... and has a closet full of daisy ones
vs
I don’t wanna diminish ya cred, but you deserved your spot in my mag ya clown
Cuz I nailed Chrit to the wall, and the whole fucking thing came crashing down
Don’t get bashful now, you’re overrated. Ho you’re a bust, in fact:
The only W you deserve, is that nigga’s spot in the Rusty match
He shouts about beating people up. Please, you’re more like a featherweight
Last time he took somebody out, he couldn’t get her to agree on a second date
cool matchup. long story short, chrit hit harder and with more wit to me than coop. the execution was a tad better too. coop had some nice lines but the majority were average. not his usual showing imo.
v/chrit
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What ur reppin is wack, I cant help how Im bestin this fag
who's harshest material was a fuckin section in mags
nice hit..
This kid aint fresh with whips, his whole damn swag is a trite lie
cause coop deville'n and drives around like a white guy
didn't like it.
You're a compulsive hater dude, n thats why this fool'll get fucked
since you cant stomach meters, Ill just give u a foot to the gut
coo..
It's all ur fault guy, Im forced into dropping my verses on time
cause you cant ever give an extension while ur girl is on mine
decent
me n her are tight punk, she's been takin it from behind bruh
So while ur writing, Ill finger the cunt before even seeing a line up
aiiight..
Now ur tryin to flex right? but you aint never been givin the best ride
Cause I seen ur xterra... hole in ur pride with talk of ur sex life
lol, nice.
The games are done, this crossdressing fool's a flaming bum
cause duke's a hazzard... and has a closet full of daisy ones
lol'ed..
Ur a text geek, while my lines are always getting the best feed
To the point Punch'll reword it, and end up beating you next week
wow so early, lol.
vs
DAMN you’re a bitch, a waste of time, a faggot and a fake combined
And you’d be a shitty Bartender, cuz you’re only good at making whine
aiight coo..
Plus you don’t take your time writing, it’s why you’ll never finish ahead
You only write last minute cuz you usually only last minutes in bed
eh..
I don’t wanna diminish ya cred, but you deserved your spot in my mag ya clown
Cuz I nailed Chrit to the wall, and the whole fucking thing came crashing down
lmfao..
Don’t get bashful now, you’re overrated. Ho you’re a bust, in fact:
The only W you deserve, is that nigga’s spot in the Rusty match
good..
Fuck, you’re wack. You think you’re advancing? You must be fuckin ‘round
He only wants Token, to use it for the subway and be considered ‘underground’
eh...
Another sound from you and I’ll smack you again, you know what C bout
Bar hasn’t bitten in 2 years, cuz 2 years ago I knocked his fuckin teeth out!
it's aiight.. not feelin' it too much.
He shouts about beating people up. Please, you’re more like a featherweight
Last time he took somebody out, he couldn’t get her to agree on a second date
seen similar punches.. this was aiight.
You’re second-rate. And I hate extensions, I shouldn’t have to say it though
But you posted your verse late dumbass, April fool’s day was two days ago
nah..
good verses from both.. coop had the hardest punch imo..
but chrit was just piling the hits on compared to coop..
vote Chrit
What ur reppin is wack, I cant help how Im bestin this fag
who's harshest material was a fuckin section in mags
The games are done, this crossdressing fool's a flaming bum
cause duke's a hazzard... and has a closet full of daisy ones
Ur a text geek, while my lines are always getting the best feed
To the point Punch'll reword it, and end up beating you next week
Now ur tryin to flex right? but you aint never been givin the best ride
Cause I seen ur xterra... hole in ur pride with talk of ur sex life
vs
I don’t wanna diminish ya cred, but you deserved your spot in my mag ya clown
Cuz I nailed Chrit to the wall, and the whole fucking thing came crashing down
He shouts about beating people up. Please, you’re more like a featherweight
Last time he took somebody out, he couldn’t get her to agree on a second date
You’re second-rate. And I hate extensions, I shouldn’t have to say it though
But you posted your verse late dumbass, April fool’s day was two days ago
veeeery close here. cool matchup, i enjoyed it. good shit in both verses, though a couple of bars I wasn't feeling. coop started dodgily but introduced some good shit later on. that 'crashing down' bar made me rofl, just plain funny. chrit had some nice shit, he also had that xterra line which was cool, and some other bars which were solid if not so fresh (meters/foot thing etc). coop had more I just wasn't really feeling. some of his bars seemed to lack the snap of his earlier verses, like the subway bar and the 'last minute' thing. the concepts didn't hold together strongly there, and that cost him.
v/chrit
Chrit wins (6-3)
Coop loses (5-2)
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