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Dec 9, 2004 - 7 posts - 4 authors
On the roof shaking & sweating victim in my site. Taking a life getting ready to kill, is this one Right All my nerves intact and my sniper Wesson Drawn Can't hold back the hyper aggression this dudes gone. It was grosser then ...
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I think we should have an option to read threads when it's non-RB involved, but I'm not about to raise my blood pressure. lmao, I use to respect trajik for his work. Still do, but he as a person is a legitimate 21st century "fuckboy" by definition.
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he Gift
12/24/25
11:59PM, I surprise the screaming boy in the coffin...
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The snowfall had his heart in a race, his feet started to pace
'Tis the season to be jolly, but it was far from the grace
What does this mean? It feels incomplete
Christmas Eve; emerald & ruby was a chart of the place
A chart of the place?
But was blood, guts & organs also another part for its face?
I like this a lot
He whistled a tune, light glistened the room. & lifted the tomb,
This doesn't make sense, 'in' after glistened would be better, you sacrificed for the flow, also, no period needed.
To the last victim of whom he made a bond, then ripped it in two
Dope
The holidays were lonely, the screams were desolate cheer
desolate cheer? desolate means devoid of cheer...devoid of cheer, cheer?
A sleepy small town that never knew, but restless with fear
If it never knew, how would it be restless with fear?
This serial killer had an artisan's eye & his message was clear
I liked this
What would be the greatest gift of them all -- tested in here
Maroon stained silverware & covered bodies laid in the attic
Rotting flesh wiped clean, leather masks. made into fabric
leather masks made in to fabric? how?
Contrast:
Broad day philosophy professor. taught of "finding your worth"
"Connect to your roots" -- then buried to confide in the Earth
Cool...chill with the random periods tho lol
Students would line & disappear around this time of the year
Nothing more than a cog in a machine, his idle mind was a gear
A mechanism of lesson was from which this martyr derived;
Seeded in traumatic abuse & loss. he was bothered, deprived
Spent December lost in his head's Cavern: the hall of his mind
this section was really good
A membrane filled with Hieroglyphs of pain where all of it hide,
And jested fact from fiction in a crux next to a wall of divide
Calendar stress eased as Winter took over; Roman call of the ides
Do you mean Ide of March? that's in spring
Salt in the tides of his enslaved body. the thrall of the hive,
Whipped into his back as psychopathic temptation. often he cried
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11:59 and Santa's blessings were near. presents off the side
Off the side? huh?
His message was here as he walked to the coffin & pried,
Its structure open; he whispered as he looked softly inside
"Merry Christmas motherfucker and Thank God you're alive."
Cool ending
Yeah, don't talk to me about substance. Do people read verses and even question if they make sense anymore?
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Searched it for the link. One or two changed here and there but all in all the same verse. I was 12 when he wrote it as well.
Just my fucking luck that in the first week of the first league I run, a site moderator recycled his verse.
@Tim... may as well tag time for his explanation but he's not exactly given me any options has he. DQd.
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btw I'm just fucking around, but I make sure my shit makes 100% sense, and if you question me, I'm gonna pick out the big holes in your shit lol
And yeah, leopards and spots and whatnot @Erebus lol
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@Witty I dunno who the fuckers a leopard or tiger around here though haha. This shit was easier on LB
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Guess that's week one done. Well that was..............eventful.
Magazine will be up maybe tomorrow depending on if @The Law and @OG Maestro can feed the no show verses in time.
I asked @Emily if she could set up the matches for this week (as in pick them since me and Fresh are involved now). I'll then send her some topics which she can assign to each battle.
@AFox and @Jonny Blaze have been banned for one week for no showing. They may return in week 3 if they wish. @Tim... has been banned for 3 weeks for recycling. He can return in week 5.
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you're right.
i'm sorry @OG Maestro
infektedpenz
lol pathetic, half the staff on here are/were former biters and shit.
Dagel, Tim, Dagel again, Tim again...
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this...
whoever he is going against, which in this case was @Erebus , put up a great verse that he worked hard on, only to be let down and disrespected, and would have lost the match if not for the research..
Tbh my verse was a bit shit......plus we were 2-2 so I was in with a shot haha. Whatever. Too much negativity with this shit. Hopefully I get the next round of match ups in tonight and I can post them and the mag tomorrow.
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Should I come back t modding?
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Yet u go page 8 and page 9 yall still bitter I dropped and nigma so called posted a NS verse. He had time to change it. He knew I'd be dropping he never denied me posting. His fault not mods. Mods sought to make it a match to prevent a NS....
Fuck outta here with ur soft as bro. U used to be cool now u got this ego like u some type of something on this site. Relate to what @Witty said and beat somebody notable on 100% brush.
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